tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-961575487165132975.post3383294519644417564..comments2023-10-21T00:44:14.815+11:00Comments on 100 First Drafts - Becoming a Prolific Writer: The Universal Law of Action and ReactionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11625617346595249494noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-961575487165132975.post-32301540637864777762020-11-07T04:26:03.853+11:002020-11-07T04:26:03.853+11:00Every year, thousands of customers around the worl...Every year, thousands of customers around the world choose MaroCar for a cheap car hire in Morocco. The platform operates in the main cities of the kingdom (Casablanca, Marrakech, Tangiers, Rabat ...) and delivers its cars to the address of your choice or directly to the main airports in the country.<a href="www.almeydalaw.com" rel="nofollow">abogado de inmigracion</a><br /><a href="www.almeydalaw.com" rel="nofollow">abogado de inmigracion</a><br />Maxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03261000218797829384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-961575487165132975.post-79577888244106570202014-07-20T19:12:50.739+10:002014-07-20T19:12:50.739+10:00I admit I was disappointed that this was a publish...I admit I was disappointed that this was a published and award winning book, so can hardly expect more from other ebooks. <br />It really is a remarkable book these days that can escape my inner writing critic! Lord of The Rings succeeded though :D Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11625617346595249494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-961575487165132975.post-78946300041961181512014-07-20T19:08:21.097+10:002014-07-20T19:08:21.097+10:00Don't worry, the characters aren't consist...Don't worry, the characters aren't consistent even within the book! <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11625617346595249494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-961575487165132975.post-44023425583745872782014-07-20T18:22:18.794+10:002014-07-20T18:22:18.794+10:00Me again!
I've been thinking over the action/...Me again!<br /><br />I've been thinking over the action/reaction technique and I finally have the "why" to my question of why I don't enjoy some of the ebooks I bought recently. I thought it was because I was reading about characters with multiple personality disorders (their moods change almost with each line of dialogue! From sadness, to giggling, to chirping, to confusion, to teasing, etc. etc.) Now I see it's got everything to do with action/reaction. People's moods don't change that swiftly because events don't change that swiftly, although the level of intensity of the mood will escalate, depending on the circumstances. And it's their mood that is going to influence their reactions - how they speak, act, and what they say.<br /><br />On another note, I'm realising that just because an ebook has a good cover and an interesting blurb, and the ebook is (technically) published, the writing may not be all that great. It's annoying, but I suppose I can learn from how not to do it, just as much as I can from how to do it...<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789345714956252856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-961575487165132975.post-87590463470608133802014-07-19T21:08:01.492+10:002014-07-19T21:08:01.492+10:00This is a great post about Action & Reaction. ...This is a great post about Action & Reaction. There's nothing like having a good example to demonstrate how it's done (or not done, in this case).<br /><br />If we have an agenda as writers ("this HAS to happen"), then the action/reaction may get overlooked. I'm going to make sure I watch out for this technique in my own writing!<br /><br />I might have a go at rewriting this scene with the reactions of Ping and Danzi. (I haven't read this book, though, so what I write will probably not fit the characters in the book.)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789345714956252856noreply@blogger.com